Yet Another NEW SCRPIT and Storyboard + Animatic

After many talks with many tutors we've taken some advice and added it to our story. We liked jamie's idea's of adding more jokes and making it a little crazier and we took jareds advice into consideration about looking at background information for more inspiration into why things are happening.

We then spoke to Dan and he was a huge help, he's helped us see faults, tie up lose ends in the story so now everything ties together, everything has a purpose and reason, and the slower scenes have bin cut and any info needed from them has been applied to other shots and scenes.

Overall we are all very happy with the story now.











THE FINAL CONCLUSION
first draft concept.